posted on February 3, 2008 at 3:27 am

a night of stormy passion
children go gently into good night
black rain falls outside
sydney hot and steamy
my wife and i indulge
in everything
lose myself within my flesh
naked or in my pinstripe suit
i am slave and master
i am brutal and soft
in the darkness my huge pupils see everything
she is so gorgeous
i am such a monster
sweating and bucking and slipping
hours glide by
1 2 3 am
my baby and i love to love
rock around the clock
dont write about that she says
but gee youre good she adds
the rain bangs on
the music plays softly in our room
the fan whirrs
the blinds clang n bang in the breezes
taboo you
we seek oblivion
i am a man
cant you see what i am
spirit mind body
not surviving on head alone
lost in the mysterious temple
four bidden
touching touching
my face says it all
my little wife pulling the strings
sometimes so gentle
sometimes so violent
hurting loving loving hurting
hurt me cupid
hurt me aphrodite
shoot me down
sweet toxic love all over the place
the children dream on
we ride on into the morning
almost no sleep
the ruins of love
the day intrudes
in the cold light she is still beautiful
dishevelled young slim feminine
suddenly the kids are all up
oh no
oh no not ready for that
we retreat into safety
the rain just falls n falls
desire seemingly inexhaustible
why is that?
her smell
her voice
her way of loving
her fragrant breath
her girlish ways
we do not long for the bars n parties
we do not long for the outside
a sanctuary
wedded bliss!

19 Responses to “electrical disturbance”

  1. avatar
    heavy breather | 3 February 2008 at 4:00 am #

    i’m here in ohio and my computer just exploded
    my glasses are fogged up
    and Ive got itchy palms
    any suggestions?

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    nk | 3 February 2008 at 4:01 am #


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    veleska1970 | 3 February 2008 at 4:22 am #

    wow~~all that summer rain has brought out the romantics in you both. 😉 hope y’all were able to get some sleep after your all-nighter, LOL.

    have a good afternoon, steve.

    lotza love….

  4. avatar
    William | 3 February 2008 at 4:35 am #

    good on you…both!

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    Matt | 3 February 2008 at 5:52 am #

    You old devil, killa.

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    Anonymous | 3 February 2008 at 6:10 am #

    gee your good she say…paaaleess.

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    eek | 3 February 2008 at 6:37 am #

    Sounds as if you had a really good weekend! 🙂

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    Anonymous | 3 February 2008 at 7:00 am #

    paaaleess, oh, forgot to ask.
    is it the buzzz or a letter of the alphabet??
    It’s great isn’t it…why can’t the world always be like that?…it can’t, can it?…life is a challenge… gotta pick yr self up and face the real world…an thats Ok…It’s good to know thats OK…The eternal struggle between the flesh n the spirit…not really a struggle I ‘spose…

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    linjo | 3 February 2008 at 7:19 am #

    Cripes, now I really feel like a voyeur! So much mojo after how many years together?
    Keep up the good health Steve. Dont know how old your NK is but women get even hornier in their late 30’s.
    Having said that, more cobwebs here than Miss Haversham’s lingerie draw! Something to rectify I hope this year! Sleep well tonight.

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    linjo | 3 February 2008 at 7:20 am #


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    Celticat | 3 February 2008 at 9:21 am #

    Beautiful Steve, went to write some other insightful comments but………..can’t.

    ’tis a beautiful thing!

    Love to you and NK.

  12. avatar
    davem | 3 February 2008 at 9:23 am #

    Go and have a cold shower.
    Much love to you Brien. Sorry to read your news.

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    Ethereal Butterfly | 3 February 2008 at 9:37 am #

    Blessed be the ‘beasts’ & the children! I think that there is nothing else like making LOVE with someone who you’re in LOVE WITH & whom you know in your heart is in LOVE with you- it transcends body, mind & soul…………… The male partner sustaining himself for a couple of hours is the best way to go hey ladies?

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    princey | 3 February 2008 at 9:52 am #

    OH my God, I’m blushing!!!, but must agree with EButterfly and linjo, it keeps on keeping on into the early 40’s….trust me!! haha
    (oh no sk, see what you’ve done!!)
    Love Amanda

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    Hellbound Heart | 3 February 2008 at 10:14 am #

    glad i’m not the only one who experiences the BURN…
    the pleasure that eminates from your writing today is a palpable thing, i could just about reach out and touch it…
    love always…

  16. avatar
    Bionaut | 3 February 2008 at 11:47 pm #

    I’ll have what he’s having.

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    lily was here | 6 February 2008 at 12:41 pm #

    Bedded bliss! you show off! … nothing but nothing beats lovemaking and rain. Why is your desire inexhaustible? Because there’s always an nk in nookie 🙂


  18. avatar
    Anonymous | 8 February 2008 at 6:53 am #

    kiss my artz! ;D

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    lovely things | 8 February 2008 at 6:55 am #

    fuckin’ elle! :s

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