posted on November 5, 2013 at 7:51 pm
mystery tramp

mystery tramp



blessed earth accept this rain

i’m walking through your hemisphere

where every step is dagger sharp

everyone come back again

this dream is ending this book has closed

this part we playing oh so long

in darkest night we travellers in distance

find me falling through a song

then somebody said lets let go

a voice in another room or from another world

somebody else said double happy ending

suddenly i thought their just pretending

then mercury had ascent over venus

and priestess and fool followed both of the kings

and everything  sloshed down with wight whine

sweetie thats just the shadow daylight brings

seacrest crescent is blurred in a mist

the first time the clouds and stars are missing

i’m just a man in this queue for a clue

still wondering what to do

10 Responses to “further sooner”

  1. avatar
    Chris | 5 November 2013 at 8:48 pm #

    mystic tramping through time with the eyes and vision of a seer…

  2. avatar
    Kohl Ette | 5 November 2013 at 8:51 pm #

    Don’t worry, Sweetie. The clouds and stars went missing because of the mister when your legs were being de/creased. Oh I’m not always flippant. But someone mentioned about pleasure and I hadn’t pondered too long when the word ‘spontaneous’ popped into my head. On the other hand, someone mentioned about responsible too – so well, yes. I understand.

  3. avatar
    Cath | 5 November 2013 at 9:16 pm #

    For a clue
    To wonder
    what to do
    be you
    for a chime
    for a dime be true!
    Love to you,. you forgot to mention time for people to come to the Toff? Or i could not see….see you in Northcote:)

  4. avatar
    kell | 5 November 2013 at 9:26 pm #

    still wondering what 2 do…..deeper, further, like you always do xx

  5. avatar
    Michel | 6 November 2013 at 12:32 am #

    Well, this is art !

  6. avatar
    pamela | 6 November 2013 at 2:25 am #

    Mystic, mythic, celestial, worldly, unworldly, invocation….thank you – I so enjoyed the ride…

  7. avatar
    cheryl | 6 November 2013 at 8:35 am #

    across the universe then back to reality

  8. avatar
    Anonymous | 6 November 2013 at 9:20 am #

    Well Well Well. Coincidental or what?

  9. avatar
    onabla | 7 November 2013 at 10:24 am #

    still wondering
    still wandering
    grubs are eating the grass

  10. avatar
    hellbound heart | 10 November 2013 at 5:24 pm #

    some wisdom here, steve…..many steps taken in this life cause pain, don’t they
    love always…….

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