posted on October 29, 2011 at 6:44 pm

rapid/intrepid

a faint moon

whispering somewhere

you wake up and you cant remember

the island is divided

summer quarantine

winter strangers

the ocean has left

limbs of traffic amputated

even the trees

keep thinking its yesterday

keep remembering its tomorrow

9 Responses to “withheld”

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    eekie | 29 October 2011 at 10:36 pm #

    forlorn

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    . | 29 October 2011 at 11:29 pm #

    a no explanation-ish, less is more-ish, boys of summer-ish,
    staring into a deep pool and reflecting your existence-ish kind of entry.
    good stuff. does the moon ever have a loud voice? maybe.

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    Once | 30 October 2011 at 3:58 am #

    I can actually FEEL the sense of “withheld” in this…

    God, that’s amazing.

    Genius SK.

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    BROKEN TOYS AND HEROS | 30 October 2011 at 4:26 am #

    Keep wishing it was another time…
    Keep believing it all must get better.

    AsAlways,
    Darrin

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    evilren | 30 October 2011 at 5:38 am #

    Short and bittersweet.

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    hellbound heart | 31 October 2011 at 1:38 pm #

    a bitter autumn melody

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    . | 31 October 2011 at 9:32 pm #

    let’s go a souling to honor & appease those who have passed
    let our prayers penetrate the mortal veil, samhain is upon us at last
    a treat for a melodic tune, jacky lantern holds the adversary fast,
    scary faces, bonfire traces, old wise tales, let’s look into the past
    between yesterday and tomorrow, the departed will sing and dance
    with us one last time before they walk the razor’s edge and laugh
    as they’re welcomed back to the Beginning in the land of Enchantment

  8. Kraig
    Kraig | 5 November 2011 at 2:40 am #

    Love the poem…especially the line “limbs of traffic amputated”.

    Hey, that background looks like a subway, but i’m guessing it’s your room.

    Cheers!
    Kraig

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    M E M | 5 November 2011 at 6:30 pm #

    “…how tired i am, the evenings and mornings, the nights and days..” “my scalp is drying-up!”


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